55 Flash Fiction: Invitations

Thursday, January 21st, 2010 @ 9:11 pm | In my life..., In writing...

I almost forgot, G!  But here I am… without a prod, push, or poke!  Go me!

“You’ll come, wont you?” her friend asked.  “Please say you’ll come!”
Sarah hesitated, her emotions in turmoil.
Her friend paused. “Oh. Unless you don’t want to.  I mean… I understand.”
“No, I want to!” Sarah assured her.  “I just… he’ll be there.  With her.”
“Sorry,” her friend frowned.  “I don’t get him.  We’re all puzzled.”

Story behind the story:

A good friend is marrying my ex’s younger brother.  Need I say more?  I suppose this is not as bad as the time I was invited to the wedding of the guy I had my eye on… by the guy himself!  Nothing could’ve persuaded me to attend that one.  This one might be possible.  With moral support.  Maybe.

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16 Responses to “55 Flash Fiction: Invitations”

  1. Susan Anderson Says:

    Oh, I can so relate to this one. Good luck on this!

    I’m up right HERE

  2. G-Man Says:

    If you can keep from being ‘Creeped Out’, you should go for the Booze and food!
    Thanks Smoofie for this Most Excellent 55.
    You Rock from Paragould to Hot Springs!
    Have a Kick Ass Week-End…G

  3. Boomer Says:

    Smack! Bam! Splat!
    Stop!
    Don’t go!
    Count to 55 instead!

  4. Monkey Man Says:

    Like sand in your shorts. My 55 is HERE.

  5. Ronda Laveen Says:

    If you don’t go, you’ll regret not being there for your good friend. But I can certainly understand why you wouldn’t want to.

  6. Janna Says:

    Yikes.
    I can relate to stuff like this too.
    Life can be such a mess sometimes! :(

    Thanks for doing Friday 55!
    You can read mine right here.

  7. SandyCarlson Says:

    Oh, that’s complicated. Go with an eye open to the fiction that can emerge from the drama! And good luck. Take you Pepto just in case.

  8. brian miller Says:

    yikes. i would go anyway, just to see the look on his face. smiles. nice 55!

    mine is up!

  9. Hootin' Anni Says:

    ONE rotten apple spoils the whole bushel. But…go, enjoy.

    My 55 is HERE, scroll below my show n tell stuff.

    Happy Friday.

  10. Mike Says:

    Smarm, if you like, a bunch of us will go with ya! Great 55…

  11. Alice Audrey Says:

    Sounds like a fight waiting to happen. Then again,if you have friends to run interference, it could be manageable.

  12. Susan at Stony River Says:

    Oh BOY. Well, I guess that’s what the champagne is for LOL. What the heck, it’s a good chance to show your real friends the amazing amount of class and strength you’ve got : good luck getting through it anyhow!

  13. Dr John Says:

    Sometimes life is hard but makes a good 55.

  14. Peter Stone Says:

    Talk about uncomfortable situations, and thanks for the explanations.

  15. Mojo Says:

    Awkward much?

    *sympathetic face*

  16. Mama Zen Says:

    Yikes! Awkward!

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