55 Flash Fiction: Defining Friends, part 2
Thursday, September 4th, 2008 @ 8:00 pm | In my life..., In writing...
This is my thirty-ninth 55, and my second installment in the series.
She could make commission if she did well, so she’d called him. He was a family friend… he’d buy just to be kind. He didn’t buy, but they talked almost an hour. He asked her to call him back. She’d enjoyed their chat, but thought it nothing more. She was awkward… he couldn’t want her.
Story behind the story:
The first installment can be found here.
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September 4th, 2008 at 10:51 pm
Sure he could. He’s just shy.
rawr…
And Yahtzee!
September 5th, 2008 at 2:45 am
ah! making commission , so its tourist trade right?
& why would he not want her, pray?
September 5th, 2008 at 7:31 am
Ah, of course he would. :D Great 55.
September 5th, 2008 at 9:40 am
Ah but he does want her, hope she isn’t afraid of reaching out :)
Wonderful 55.
Have a great weekend kiddo.
September 5th, 2008 at 10:25 am
at least that’s what she thinks…he does. hope she can see that someone really does. great job, smarmy. i’m up now.
September 5th, 2008 at 1:35 pm
There’s chemistry! Great 55 Smarmoofus. :)
September 5th, 2008 at 7:21 pm
Show Me The Money!!!!
I liked this very very much Smoofy!!!
Excellent job!!!!
Thanks for playing, and Have a Great Week-End!!
G..:-)
September 6th, 2008 at 11:30 pm
Commission? Honey, none of the other ‘working girls’ call it a commission. :p
September 7th, 2008 at 2:34 am
hahaha! *thwaps Erica*