55 Flash Fiction: Defining Friends, part 10

Thursday, October 30th, 2008 @ 8:00 pm | In my life..., In writing...

Woo!  We’re up to episode ten in the series.  This is my forty-seventh 55.  Why do I count them?  Does anybody really care how many I’ve written?

After repeating her curtsy, she plopped again into the loveseat.  He gazed at her a moment.

“Why don’t you sit over here?” he finally drawled.

“I… uh… do you want me to?” she stammered.

She stammered!

But then she clambered out of the loveseat and sat — a full cushion away from him — on the sofa.

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10 Responses to “55 Flash Fiction: Defining Friends, part 10”

  1. Erica Says:

    Drawled? As in southern drawl? A full cushion away, really? This is the longest most awkward lusty scene. It is going to get lusty isn’t it? *makes popcorn*

  2. Erica Says:

    Oh, and Yahtzee, Bingo, Monopoly y’all, I’m building hotels. :P Yeah, I’m in one of those snarky moods again.

  3. Smarmoofus Says:

    Hotels already? I think you’re cheating. I’m quite sure my girl is a good girl. She won’t get lusty. *headshake* No way.

  4. ciara Says:

    uh, who doesn’t get lusty while just a cushion away? hehehe great installment, marmy. i’m not feeling super duper today, but i’ll try to get one posted a little later.

    i have to wait to vote until tuesday…no early voting here.

  5. G-Man Says:

    yes…Too much stammerin, and drinkin, and winkin…
    Just get on with the bangin!!!
    Thanks for playin though…
    Have a Happy Halloween….G

  6. James Goodman Says:

    Ah, another intriguing 55. Nicely done. :D

  7. Mojo Says:

    What was it you said to me once? “You put the ‘B’ in ’subtle’” I think it was… I have a feeling that once the filters get turned off, your girl could get quite lusty indeed!

    Oh, and anybody that wants it can feel free to pilfer the “My Vote Is Rocked” graphic I used in yesterday’s post. I’d include a sample, but I’m pretty sure your comments don’t support img tags. (Though I’m gonna try it anyway)…

  8. Mojo Says:

    Yeah, I was right. Your comments strip out img tags. Okay, so you can just go to the post and steal it from there.

  9. mona Says:

    they seem to be ‘inching’ forward, literally :D

  10. Donnetta Lee Says:

    Sounds like she’s getting closer. Hey, I’m counting them with you!! Have a happy Halloween! D

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