55 Flash Fiction: Magi’s Struggle
Another 55, just for you… and you, and you, and you!
His jaw set in the angle of grim determination, he soldiered on. She watched, troubled by his need to save the world, wishing she could do more to ease his burden.
Misreading her frown of concern, he vowed to not rest ’til she was free from all her worries.
His will be a long war.
Story behind the story:
The bar is open, and we are serving Diet Pepsi with love–er, lime. Come in, take a load off, and have a drink or three. Let’s worry about each other.
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August 28th, 2009 at 1:13 am
To infinity and beyond! The ultimate superhero storyline done with love. ;-)
August 28th, 2009 at 6:08 am
A great 55. A hero and an impossible quest. The very essence of good fiction.
My 55 is posted
HERE.
August 28th, 2009 at 6:21 am
Smoofy…Thank you for coming out of hiding to share this little gem with us all. You always take meticulous care with these, and I really appreciate it.
Excellent 55 My Dear…
Very thoughtful contribution, and have a Kick-Ass Week-End….G
August 28th, 2009 at 6:44 am
i can relate..
if he only listened..
you are loved
brother frankie
a biker for Christ
55 for me this week..
http://spankieg.blogspot.com/2009/08/he-felt-rage-friday-55.html
August 28th, 2009 at 7:16 am
Excellent!!!
My 55 is posted [scroll down below my Friday Show n Tell!]
August 28th, 2009 at 12:13 pm
What, Me Worry?
Intriguing little circle of life you have here Smoofus. A vicious cycle if there ever was one.
August 29th, 2009 at 4:40 pm
…and the Dream Lives On!
Come help me pick up this torch. ;-)
August 29th, 2009 at 5:00 pm
Oh…and Diet Pepsi with Lime would be fantabulous. Thank you.
August 29th, 2009 at 6:58 pm
Tombstone, if you carry that torch, you will be my hero, indeed. And I’m short one hero these days.
August 30th, 2009 at 12:15 am
*hands Smarmoofus a sandwich* :P
August 30th, 2009 at 5:00 am
*Translates* Like a Grinder in New England…oh wait…
Like a Grindah in New England. =D
August 30th, 2009 at 11:20 am
Ooh, sammich! *nom* Tasty!