55 Flash Fiction Friday: Distance

Friday, January 11th, 2008 @ 6:04 am | In writing...

Welcome to my tenth 55! I’m excited about reaching double digits. You should be, too, because it’s going to be a long time before we add another digit.

“You’re pink,” he observed.
“I am,” she smiled.
“You’re warm,” he continued.
“Yes.”
“You’re smelly,” he said from eight-hundred miles away.
“Yeah…” she sighed, as was her line.
“You’re slobbery,” he grinned.
She pouted playfully trying hard not to giggle, “I can’t help it!”
“I know,” he laughed.

“I miss you,” they both said, simultaneously.

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14 Responses to “55 Flash Fiction Friday: Distance”

  1. G-Man Says:

    Hehehehe..
    I think I’ve had this conversation!!
    Excellent job as always, thanks for playing, and have a great week-end…You Rock Girl…xox

  2. mona Says:

    Awww that is sooo sweet! Distance does make the heart grow fonder…:) :)

  3. Strumpet Says:

    Ohhhh….

    This is so sweet.

    It made me all warm and tingly inside.

    It’s so great.

  4. Casdok Says:

    That was lovely!

  5. Little Wing Says:

    Ahhhh what great communication!!!!
    I LOVE this!

  6. Akelamalu Says:

    They’re in love! Great 55. x

  7. Serena Joy Says:

    I really, really like this. You did a great job!:)

  8. LinZ Says:

    I hope you get all the info you need to continue your Magnum Opus here.

    *hugs*

  9. MoonFang Says:

    nice

  10. Flash Says:

    I actually had a relationship like that for a while. When I moved to South Dakota (800 miles from Chicago)I had a girlfriend who we would insult each other, but more out of loving jokes for each other. It was our way to express our feelings for each other and it worked so well.

  11. Erica (Mom's Journal) Says:

    Are you sure it’s only 800 miles? When I use Google maps it shows 841. :P

  12. Charles Says:

    Wow, if it weren’t for Flash’s comment, I wouldn’t have understood this. Forgive me, I am male.

  13. Smarmoofus Says:

    You are most assuredly male, Charles. *chuckle*

    Erica, close enough. “841 miles” doesn’t flow quite as well.

    Everybody else: Thank you for the nice words.

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