55 Flash Fiction Friday: Distance
Welcome to my tenth 55! I’m excited about reaching double digits. You should be, too, because it’s going to be a long time before we add another digit.
“You’re pink,” he observed.
“I am,” she smiled.
“You’re warm,” he continued.
“Yes.”
“You’re smelly,” he said from eight-hundred miles away.
“Yeah…” she sighed, as was her line.
“You’re slobbery,” he grinned.
She pouted playfully trying hard not to giggle, “I can’t help it!”
“I know,” he laughed.“I miss you,” they both said, simultaneously.
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January 11th, 2008 at 6:35 am
Hehehehe..
I think I’ve had this conversation!!
Excellent job as always, thanks for playing, and have a great week-end…You Rock Girl…xox
January 11th, 2008 at 7:59 am
Awww that is sooo sweet! Distance does make the heart grow fonder…:) :)
January 11th, 2008 at 9:01 am
Ohhhh….
This is so sweet.
It made me all warm and tingly inside.
It’s so great.
January 11th, 2008 at 9:25 am
That was lovely!
January 11th, 2008 at 11:21 am
Ahhhh what great communication!!!!
I LOVE this!
January 11th, 2008 at 11:32 am
They’re in love! Great 55. x
January 11th, 2008 at 9:46 pm
I really, really like this. You did a great job!:)
January 12th, 2008 at 9:51 am
I hope you get all the info you need to continue your Magnum Opus here.
*hugs*
January 12th, 2008 at 9:52 am
nice
January 14th, 2008 at 10:34 am
I actually had a relationship like that for a while. When I moved to South Dakota (800 miles from Chicago)I had a girlfriend who we would insult each other, but more out of loving jokes for each other. It was our way to express our feelings for each other and it worked so well.
January 15th, 2008 at 3:18 pm
Are you sure it’s only 800 miles? When I use Google maps it shows 841. :P
January 16th, 2008 at 10:39 pm
Wow, if it weren’t for Flash’s comment, I wouldn’t have understood this. Forgive me, I am male.
January 17th, 2008 at 8:31 am
You are most assuredly male, Charles. *chuckle*
Erica, close enough. “841 miles” doesn’t flow quite as well.
Everybody else: Thank you for the nice words.
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